useless

degrees of purpose
caretaking
job God gave Adam
yet to grow
what needs attention
i wonder how far we’ve come
in exhibiting procured entitlements
for industrious surroundings

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6 thoughts on “useless

  1. annotating60

    This is really well done. I love everything about it. Though I think it weould be more powerful and resonant if you lost the last line. You can still the same and more. ‘procured entitlments grates perfectly againmst the rest of the verse but adding ‘industrious surroundings’ is overkill. Great read.>KB

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